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User #61985
May 16, 2006 11:17 AM

Hey people read my new comics beginin from One at this time in moment i havent really got far but i asure they will be amazing!
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If you dont believe me just ask the 2347 other guns i hold in my pockets!

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User #60395
May 16, 2006 11:27 AM

sucks

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AngryAmerican
May 16, 2006 1:03 PM

if you want to do a whole fucking comic book, write one.
a serial comic is only gonna work if the first one MAKES YOU WANNA READ MORE!
all this comic does if fear for the future of mankind, and not in a good way.

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Jarhead
May 16, 2006 3:31 PM

AngryAmerican isa lil'right.
You need more than one comic part to hook us in.
I did always have an idea to do a serious story here and try to make it good but you must delivery perfectly,you hear?

I'm gonna read soem more when you write more but to see if you can pull this off.
Just think and try to make it good and worth-while while being entertaining because if you do carry this right, You may start a new genere here istead of humor...
Just work harder,k?

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Jarhead
May 16, 2006 3:58 PM

Nevermind my praise...I just read part 2 and 3...
Not only did you try to add bad humor in it the story was horribly warped and terrible..
Sorry you're not a savior.
Peace out and *sigh*

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crabby
May 16, 2006 5:07 PM

I didn't think it was that bad really, I think if you stick with it, that you might eventually get on to something fun.

Keep on keepin' on.

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biped
May 16, 2006 8:25 PM

Learn to fucking spell, dumbass.

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