The structure's there, but somethings not clicking for me. I'm not sure if it was what you were going for, but in the santa-doctor comic, i reckon the doctor should have told santa he was going to fuck him whilst Santa was going sleepy. If that was what you meant in the first place, then its simply the lack of sleepy characters thats to blame :)
Keep going though :) for a first batch of comics they're better than average. The rigidity of stripcreator gets some getting used to :)