Tell me what I'm doing wrong..being a Stripcreator "virgin" is almost enough to make "Kala" and her "Adopted Grandmother" commit mutiny on the high seas. Hey, there's a thought! :D

For one... Too much unneeded, arbitrary dialogue. Cut all the fat until you have just what's needed for the set-up and the punchline.

Speaking of punchlines, you might want to work on your's. They aren't what I'd call particularly hard-hitting (read: funny).

But there is still something interesting and readable about your comics, and they aren't horrible.

You know what, I think I'll stick to my day job..lol..thanks guys! :)