I would really like some critizim I know this comic sucks so I need some pointer do you mind helping me out like what I could have done to improve my comic

Make them funnier.

seeI had some really good ones but the more I go along I can't think of any so I've been posting crap after crap

like this one

The 1st one needs a twist ending. Like the blonde guy should be saying, "please?" Or "but I brought a strap on." Or "but I could use the $3."

The second one should feature Death asking whatsisname for advice just like Tim always does. You can proceed from there to some funny crap or other. Like maybe Death's wife is going through menopause and is being a real bitch. I don't know. Put butts in it and it will be funny.

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The 1st one needs a twist ending. Like the blonde guy should be saying, "please?" Or "but I brought a strap on." Or "but I could use the $3."

The second one should feature Death asking whatsisname for advice just like Tim always does. You can proceed from there to some funny crap or other. Like maybe Death's wife is going through menopause and is being a real bitch. I don't know. Put butts in it and it will be funny.

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Put butts in it and it will be funny.

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It's true. I alone just spend a good minute or two laughing.

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I would really like some critizim I know this comic sucks so I need some pointer do you mind helping me out like what I could have done to improve my comic

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See, just throw buttsecks and race in there, and you got something.

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I would really like some critizim I know this comic sucks so I need some pointer do you mind helping me out like what I could have done to improve my comic

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This is my take on the same comic.

Peruse it. Live it. Love it (or not). A good idea would be to read some of the four and five star user's comics and try messing around with different styles util you find something you like. And keep making comics, even if they suck. Eventually you'll get the hang of it.

Then again, I wouldn't trust anything I say. I'm an
idiot.

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Anytime.