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mattaotamato
October 11, 2006 6:44 AM

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i appreciate constructive critsism :)

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not_Scyess
October 11, 2006 8:33 AM

First of all, next time try:

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I [b]appreciate[/b] constructive criticism.

Second of all, your comic presents a humorous situation quite well, but it just assumes that that's good enough. Alas, you'll need a punchline. And the 1+1=3 sub-gag is pretty lame, actually. But correct those problems and you could have a good comic there.

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biped
October 11, 2006 9:03 AM

I think...I'm gonna git me some more of these here pertaters to take home with me.

I also think...I could use me 7 or 8 more cans of that potted meat if you got any extry.

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crabby
October 11, 2006 9:40 AM

I didn't think that comic was very funny.

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Rubberchix
October 11, 2006 9:49 AM

it doesn't seem like you tried

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HCRoyall
October 11, 2006 9:51 AM

quote:
it doesn't seem like you tried
And his comic was still better than all of yours put together.

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Rubberchix
October 11, 2006 9:53 AM

you don't like me do you? my earth has shattered

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mattaotamato
October 11, 2006 4:59 PM

thank you ALL for your honesty... except for biped, who've i have yet to interpret his messages.

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boorite
October 11, 2006 7:04 PM

ah don't reckon ah got none o' them interpretations, mmm-hmmm

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crackpanther
October 11, 2006 7:49 PM

mattaotamato, I'll save you the trouble of doing what I've done (which is sad) and tell you that it's impossible to find any record of Biped giving anyone on this site anything we normal people would call a compliment in any normal sense of the word, ever.

Ok, I haven't actually really looked at all, but my gut tells me that it would be tough to find proof of anything proving anything otherwise.

If you got 'em, post 'em!

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AngryAmerican
October 12, 2006 2:22 AM

some folks call it a kaiser blade. I calls it a sling blade, uh huh.

apples and fucking oranges.
one bat, ah-ha-ha
form voltron and quaff ale.
quaffing is like chugging but you have to spill more.
yes, i haven't been drinking.

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mattaotamato
October 12, 2006 8:58 AM

i got rated zero stars! hahahahaha.

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boorite
October 12, 2006 9:11 AM

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UnknownEric
October 12, 2006 9:57 AM

I can see the guy on the right thinking "Heineken? Fuck that shit!"

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