This was my first comic on the site- ok, my only one so far.. but i want o know what you think. be warned it can be a little risque.

/comics/Fworg/375143/

Hardly risque by stripcreator standards, but I liked it.

that was the most polite and unassuming risque comic i've ever read.

Yes, it's good. The dialogue could be trimmed down, though. Faster, louder, funnier.

Even eliminating the thought balloon in the second panel would make it a little edgier, and thus a little funnier.