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That comic is all right.  Good set up, but I expected more from the punchline.

You really don't need a separate thread to post each of your comics in, though.  Especially when your comic directly references the comic posted in the other thread.

I just went back and read your first comic.  That one I liked:

Thanks for reading and for the constructive critcism (sp?) I'm new so I wasn't really sure where to put my comics. And yeah, I'm not too good with punchlines yet. Hopefully, I'll get a little better.

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Just posted a new one. I kinda hate it but....whatever.

Wow, you just started and you already have four stars!  :0

I really like your comics, please keep them coming!  :D

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Hot of the griddle, another worthless comic!

that is very interesting

please tell me more

Your comics are good.  Yay.

I don't like your screen name. I also thought your comics were presentable and diligent.

Great job!

I'd say something like "These comics are akin to eating a warm piece of toast," but "I like them" will suffice.

I don't know what it is that makes people good at comics, but I think you have an abnormally large supply of it.

/comics/GothicBunny15/386853/

Thank you all very much for the encouragement! Here's another comic!

sigh.

 i was going to say something mean but i just don't have the energy.

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AngryAmerican wrote:

sigh.

i was going to say something mean but i just don't have the energy.

 

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More!  :D

I ish addicted.  Like really...

You sure your comics aren't made from marijuana?

That last one I didn't enjoy so much.

They're alright. They didn't offend me at least.

A few of them are clever and/or interesting, but without much of a punchline.

As far as first batches of comics go though, two thumbs up my ass.

I think you're working on some funny ideas, but they seem to sort of fall flat at the end. I think a turn off for me is the cigarette saying nonsensical things in the last frame of the comic. I find them distracting, and I think, for me at least, the comics would be funnier if it weren't saying anything.

Keep up the good work!

OR IF THE CIGARETTE OPENS THE GATE TO THE MOUNTAINS OF MADNESS and like James Earl Jones is up there sitting and eating a delicious sandwich.