Just stumbled on this site yesterday and found some funny stuff.

I posted a few strips of my own and I'm looking for some criticism and ridicule. Can you help?

/comics/docmike/3886023/

I thought this was okay. It's not great, but I think you have some potential. Just try not to go for obvious jokes, and don't overuse dialogue. Not to say that this one did, but just as a pointer.

Too much religion.

I dunno.  I thought it was pretty good.  It referenced religion without being a political attack on it.  Overall, funny!

Thumbs up, but only briefly. Nice comic all the same.

too obvious of a punchline. push the envelope further.

"You mean the one you keep under you bed with all the naked boyscouts in it?"

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AngryAmerican wrote:

too obvious of a punchline. push the envelope further.

"You mean the one you keep under you bed with all the naked boyscouts in it?"

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Or even further...

"You mean the one you keep under the bed with all the naked boyscouts?"

Funny. This comic is a classic. Just try to zone in on the people you chose for characters. That boy is kinda strange-looking.

I like your comix.

As somone who lives with three Christian guys, these comics provide topical and comical relief to all the Bibles lying around and the "seven minutes with Jesus" prayer sessions every morning.