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Licking_Tulips
May 15, 2007 1:08 AM

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Licking_Tulips
May 15, 2007 5:58 AM

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Licking_Tulips
May 15, 2007 6:18 AM

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xxausrottenxx
May 15, 2007 10:48 AM

the last one was "teh funny"

 

the rest were "teh meh"

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AngryAmerican
May 16, 2007 12:22 AM

i am vaguely baffled and utterly unentertained. sorry.

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boloboffin
May 16, 2007 2:46 AM

On one and two, trying switching the characters so that their speech reads left to right.

Three appears to be fine.

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Licking_Tulips
May 16, 2007 11:08 PM

Thanks for the advice, I've only just started making these. I hope I improve.

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Licking_Tulips
May 16, 2007 11:25 PM

A new one. Hope you enjoy.
/comics/Licking_Tulips/393857/

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lildeucecoup
May 16, 2007 11:28 PM

I like just about every comic you've posted so far. I notice you use the ... before characters will talk to show that there is a pause before the character speaks. While I'm not saying it's an awful thing to do, it's sort of awkward looking IMHO. Other than that minor complaint, which I may be in the minority on, I like alot of your stuff. Keep up the good work.

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Licking_Tulips
May 17, 2007 1:50 AM

Thanks for the criticism everyone.
/comics/Licking_Tulips/393864/

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