I've been designing a few new layouts, but I'm not entirely sure about this one. Please let me know what you think- be brutally honest, but try to give me some specifics if there's something you don't like!

This is the older format (just imagine smooth text/speech bubbles and some shading):

i'm liking em.

i'm afraid i can't be more specific than that, i'm next to useless.

I prefer the comics being split into separate panels.

I prefer the expressions in the first one. I like the progression of his hands in the first two panels and I love that he's really pissed at the end. I don't like how he's cool and calm and the end of the second one. Also his hand progression is sorely missed in the second one

imho

-- red

Number two truly catches the sentiment of the strip.

Keep the layout of number one, but change the expression in the third panel to the one in number two's third panel.

I need some feedback too, would be great if I could get some!

pretty sweet dude

Nice.