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Injokester
May 27, 2007 11:59 PM

I've been designing a few new layouts, but I'm not entirely sure about this one. Please let me know what you think- be brutally honest, but try to give me some specifics if there's something you don't like!

This is the older format (just imagine smooth text/speech bubbles and some shading):

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AngryAmerican
May 28, 2007 12:40 AM

i'm liking em.

i'm afraid i can't be more specific than that, i'm next to useless.

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gabe_billings
May 28, 2007 7:40 AM

I prefer the comics being split into separate panels.

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RedfeatheR
May 28, 2007 9:08 AM

I prefer the expressions in the first one. I like the progression of his hands in the first two panels and I love that he's really pissed at the end. I don't like how he's cool and calm and the end of the second one. Also his hand progression is sorely missed in the second one

imho

-- red

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christopher7murphy
May 28, 2007 7:19 PM

Number two truly catches the sentiment of the strip.

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LuckyGuess
May 28, 2007 11:36 PM

Keep the layout of number one, but change the expression in the third panel to the one in number two's third panel.

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spaceriker
May 29, 2007 9:21 AM

I need some feedback too, would be great if I could get some!

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User #73053
May 29, 2007 9:56 AM

pretty sweet dude

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DaveMonkey
May 30, 2007 11:27 AM

Nice.

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