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People would actually bother to pay attention to you if you would stick to one thread and not spam the board with a new thread for every comic. I suggest you copy the following address and paste it in the address bar.  It is very informative as to what the regulars will put up with.

http://www.stripcreator.com/forums/showthread.php?postnum=248698

What he said.

i gave both your comics an 'okay' which is much better than most noobs first coupla attempts. keep at it.