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abhishekswarup
October 18, 2007 1:44 PM

Hey im totally new to this site. so this is my first comic......

 

/comics/abhishekswarup/409161/

 

Please leave a comment!!!!

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HCRoyall
October 18, 2007 3:54 PM

Okay, I will begin by saying that nothing I say is meant to be mean, only to help you make better comics.

 

  1. Please, please, PLEASE do not overuse punctuation. One to two exclamation points (!) are needed for any one statement with emphasis.
  2. If you are going to use punctuation at all, please use apostrophes (') when forming contractions.  Not using apostrophes combined with the overuse of the exclamation point brings your literacy into question and makes your comics look amateurish at best.
  3. Don't spend so much time trying to make a comic funny.  You end up overthinking the entire situation and then what you end up with is a big steaming pile of poo.  I submit the first comic I made here as an example:

/comics/HCRoyall/278649/

If you take these tips to heart and just let things flow instead of forcing them, you'll eventually find your own style and start making really good comics.

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The_young_scot
October 18, 2007 5:34 PM

What HCRoyall said.

 

Also, cocks.

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