Its A Comic Series I'm Doing  tell me what you think.

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its a pretty good premise but the punchline was a bit flat.

keep pluggin away. i think you're onto something.

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Oh and the kangaroo, don't ask.

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not extremely funny but oh well I tried

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oh yeah the n was supposed to be there but it was killed in a car crash on its way to work and I couldn't find a replacement in time or we could just say I typed to fast

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Flebz wrote:

not extremely funny but oh well I tried

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Try harder.

Your comics read like you made a bunch of two-panel set-ups, then separately made a bunch of one-panel punchlines, then proceeded to throw darts to determine which you would put with which.

These could be funny... but try to make them make more sense.