Please?

They aren't too long...

try harder.

Now for a first Make em interesting by using someone else besides the two asian girls and second use a different background and finally third, make em more funny and try harder like what Angry American said.

Some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism please?

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trumpet wrote:
Some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism please?

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I will read yours if you read mine ... then we will get back to the question at hand. Ok, I am back ... yep, try harder ...