I'm new to this site, and I've put up a handful of strips to get started.  I'm not really sure in which direction I want to go, and these first 4 strips are as different as can be.  I hope you enjoy them, and of course, any constructive criticism is appreciated.  I'll even accept emotional outbursts and flat-out insulting gibberish as I've heard it all before (I went to high school y'know).

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My apologies.  Watergate was actually 35 years ago.  Math fails me with a bottle of cheap cabernet in my belly.

Great screen name!

I liked "In bad taste." Keep up the comic stripping.

The second two were the funniest.  Although the island one did leave me feeling icky.

I didn't really find any of these comics funny, but they are great first attempts and show great potential for great stripping.  I look forward to your next round.

in bad taste made the effort of reading your comics worth it.

Sorry I don't have any technical or more specific advice, but I'm with notscyess; none of those really did much for me, but they were well-made. I get the feeling that I will enjoy reading more of your comics, so I'll keep an eye out for them.

You have the potential to make some really great stuff. Keep it up.

I appreciate all the responses.  As I do more and more, I'll surely improve, and I might even make funny strips.  Who knows?

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i rated eyewitness 'good'

the next one had a punchline as obvious as that thing on aaron neville's face.

"Invalid comic" Hahaha!

I think something's wrong with my computer

"Eyewitness Compassion" is really good.