Hey I Just started a new comic strip series called "The Office"

Here's a comic (it's the firstof 6 at the time)

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These are the 5 recent comics... comments pls  

you heve everything going for you except the funny. some of the punchlines just had me scratching my head thinking 'what the hell is he talking about'

keep tryin...

Two things: One, your comics weren't really about the office. Some of them may have taken place there but they weren't really about working there. It lacked the office-like demeanor that something like "Office Spaced" (or whatever that movie is called, I can't remember) had.

Two: The punchline lacked... well... punch! It didn't really get the me thinking "Wow, that was funny and not expectable at all" or "That has definately NOT been done before"

Sorry for rambling. Anyway, as the dude above me said, keep trying. I see a real broad horizon for this type of comic, you just have to work at the humor a little more.

hey guys

tanks for the feedback. :)  

it's only helpful when it's negative, isn't it? ^^  yeah i will keep tryin' thanks ;) 

good try but need better punchlines

I like them. Needs some salt and pepper tho. Yeah, I don't know what that means either.