I'm a writer trying this comic strip format for fun. Good? Bad? Retire?

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Certainly an above-average start.

And though I've largely given up correcting grammar and usage I will say the following because you're a writer: It's 'you're', not 'your'.

Keep up the good work.

Sorry bout that. Wrote it quickly, saw it, but couldn't edit as my donation hasn't gone through yet.

before spmeone else says it you might want to post you new comics in a single thread to avoid flooding the forum.

folks get a mite upset about that 'round these here parts.

Wouldn't want that...