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piplupforever
February 14, 2008 4:17 PM

Please read and comment on my comics.

Here is the first one

/comics/piplupforever/422442/

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faggot
February 14, 2008 4:39 PM

try again buddy!

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piplupforever
February 14, 2008 4:58 PM

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faggot
February 14, 2008 5:12 PM

Try for something more original

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piplupforever
February 15, 2008 1:21 AM

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BigFrank105
February 15, 2008 8:16 AM

i herd u liek piplupz

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theburninator
February 15, 2008 11:51 AM

12 year olds are not funny. Scientifically proven fact.

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El_Phen
February 15, 2008 1:19 PM

quote:

theburninator wrote:
12 year olds are not funny. Scientifically proven fact.

That's not true, whenever I see one of the little bastards get refused at an off-licence I laugh my tits off.

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piplupforever
February 22, 2008 2:43 PM

new comic! sorry it took so long.

/comics/piplupforever/423234/

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El_Phen
February 22, 2008 3:06 PM

quote:

piplupforever wrote:

new comic! sorry it took so long.

/comics/piplupforever/423234/


This isn't a joke. It's something ten year old children say when they can't think of a witty retort. Granted I'm not exactly Cap'n Funny but even I attempt jokes from time to time. By this I mean there is an introduction, set up and punchline spread over a few panels (I started with three, it gets easier to reduce down over time). But PLEASE insert something funny here. What you've done thus far is bad. Very bad. Hell look at the Top Rated comics and notice the difference to your own. I did. I then reduced the amount of sucking I did to (almost) tolerable levels.

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piplupforever
February 23, 2008 1:34 AM

Ok, Ok, i'll try again

/comics/piplupforever/423283/

hopefully this is good

 

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AngryAmerican
February 23, 2008 1:43 AM

hopeless. quit now.

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piplupforever
February 23, 2008 1:55 AM

Will all of you get off my case? I'm not a master comic maker like all of you guys say you are. Give me a break

And if you haven't got a problem with me, heres a new comic.

/comics/piplupforever/423285/

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theburninator
February 23, 2008 9:32 AM

Here's a tip: jokes that rely entirely on a character's action or posture (such as using frozen Brad to represent a person that apparently has been "blasted", as well as the kid who appears to be holding his balls (in "Prostitute Office")) do not work at all. Every concievable such joke has already been made to death and been done in much funnier ways. Like El_Phen said, look at the top-rated page and see how people craft truly funny comics.

However, even if you take this advice to heart, I still have my doubts that your comics are going to be funny any time soon. You're obviously a young kid and, no offense, but kids just aren't mature enough to be funny. When I was 10-15 or so, I was totally un-funny. I didn't make a single good joke during my puberty years, and neither has anyone else. Sorry, but that's just how it is. Maybe if you start smoking pot, you'll have a chance, but that would probably just result in horrendous pot-smoking-kid jokes, which are even worse than regular kid jokes.

Anyway, you can feel free to make all the comics you want for your own amusement or to show your friends or whatever, but don't expect anyone on this forum to like your comics for at least five more years.

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crabby
February 23, 2008 9:46 AM

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theburninator wrote:

Anyway, you can feel free to make all the comics you want for your own amusement or to show your friends or whatever, but don't expect anyone on this forum to like your comics for at least five more years.


And even then people will just spend half their time trying to big time you. You'll make a comic, you'll know it's hilarious and you'll post it. You'll wait 6 days waiting for a reply....

 

 

 

Since it was a good comic, you'll get nothing and then you'll wonder what the problem is and it'll drive you insane until you murder someone. That's the way it works around here. It isn't a pretty place.

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AngryAmerican
February 24, 2008 1:51 AM

i will get off your back.

now you are dead to me and even if you make the funniest comic in the world i will not let you know how great it was.

and its all your fault for being so defensive.

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