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carefully_strange
February 27, 2008 1:46 AM

If you've ever stayed in a dorm, this will apply to you.

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carefully_strange
February 27, 2008 1:59 AM

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/comics/carefully_strange/423700/

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carefully_strange
February 27, 2008 2:10 AM

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not_Scyess
February 27, 2008 8:52 AM

The first two were kind of boiler-plate, although well executed.  The last one was great.  Make more.

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carefully_strange
February 27, 2008 12:21 PM

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carefully_strange
February 27, 2008 12:38 PM

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another_punchline
February 27, 2008 12:56 PM

I agree the first two's humor is only based on the reveal of the character, but they are really the same thing.

The third is funny, hands down. The last one I like but not as good, maybe try a new situation.

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carefully_strange
February 27, 2008 11:56 PM

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theburninator
February 28, 2008 12:03 AM

Ehh, not bad, overall. A lot of the jokes were fairly obvious, and several were not well-executed, but with some practice, I think you could make some decent comics. Keep practicing, you have potential.

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carefully_strange
February 28, 2008 12:13 AM

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carefully_strange
February 28, 2008 12:29 AM

/comics/carefully_strange/423866/

 

Almost done introducing the characters now.

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carefully_strange
February 28, 2008 12:44 AM

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crabby
February 28, 2008 7:23 AM

I like your moxie. You show alot of dedication to your concept and I respect that. Keep up the good work!

You're already funnier than a couple of other new users I can name. I'll give you a hint, they use numbers in their user name. They also are very lame and unfunny, but don't worry, you're much better on both accounts. You have the heart of a champion and I can't wait to read "Dormz 50" and beyond!

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theburninator
February 28, 2008 10:34 AM

The force is strong with this one.

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xxausrottenxx
February 28, 2008 4:49 PM

you'd think by going to college you would know how to spell

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carefully_strange
February 28, 2008 9:35 PM

You'd think. However, they only really worry about that if your major is English.

 Anyway, here's the next one.

 

/comics/carefully_strange/423966/

 

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carefully_strange
February 28, 2008 10:11 PM

Still kinda playing around with ideas as you can see with this one, but the general story of the strip is there.

 

/comics/carefully_strange/423972/

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carefully_strange
February 29, 2008 4:00 PM

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carefully_strange
February 29, 2008 4:13 PM

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carefully_strange
February 29, 2008 4:23 PM

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carefully_strange
March 22, 2009 8:02 PM

Sorry it's been so long since I've done anything with this comic. a year really is too long for me to go without writing any more for it. Hope to be able to write more regularily again now.

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carefully_strange
March 22, 2009 8:22 PM

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carefully_strange
March 22, 2009 9:10 PM

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carefully_strange
August 10, 2010 2:30 PM

Ok, it's been a REALY long time since I've done anything with this comic, but here we go, some new ones finnaly.

 

/comics/carefully_strange/501338/

 

/comics/carefully_strange/501340/

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carefully_strange
August 10, 2010 2:43 PM

and 20

 

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HCRoyall
August 11, 2010 8:08 AM

The last one could have done without the narration box.  The splitter background with the computer poses already tells the reader that they're typing to eachother.

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