How's my first small series.

I didn't have much time. I'm far too impatient...

Next time, spend more time.

You use the narrator thing way too damn much and it only hindered the pacing of a already badly paced comic. Very rarely does using the narrator thing work and when it does it's funny but that was not the case here.

I almost laughed like twice, but then i remembered the comics sucked and didn't.

just kidding on the i almost laughed part..

I'm sorry that was mean, but quite frankly you need to slow down and spend some time on a comic instead of rushing through them like i have done before and so many newbies before us...

i thought the stand up butch was pretty good.

Holly vs Beeman, was just awful.