Hey all,

I've recently found this site and thought it would be a good place to create a series of comics embedded with mysteries that will make you read on. After reading a few comics from both the top-rated and this forum in particular, I realised that nearly all these comics are 'comedy' based.I don't hope I'm breaking any un-written law by not doing my comics based on Comedy. Here it is anyway, it's the beginning of something that I hope will be a hit, and I'll be posting updates on this thread regulary. I'd love any feedback, comments and criticism welcome.

Looking forward to what you think,

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Missing

Yours
Missing

I'm one of those guys who only likes comics based on comedy.  (Thus the term "comics.")  So I won't comment on your content, which I was never going to like.  But you seem to have good writing abilities and know how to keep a story going, so good for you.

Thanks for the kind words.

I'm awful at comedy myself, and I wasn't planning to come across a fool, so I though I'd stick to something I enjoyed and knew.

The concept sounded interesting, but the presentation could use a little more work. I feel like it is confusing and gives us no reason to care about any of the characters introduced, seen or imagined, so far. It's like reading the obituaries and thinking "Oh it's sad those people died", but ten minutes later you've already forgotten about them because that brief description gave you no reason to care.

If viewed in a vaccum, I thought this one was funny...

/comics/Missing/431425/