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a4heo
May 8, 2008 5:18 PM

/comics/a4heo/431614/

well what do you think? this is an obvious situation... in other words 'nuff said. pedofiles are for the needy (depraved hint hint) also best excuses for pants.

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a4heo
May 8, 2008 6:19 PM

crap i think messed up in the whole thing i'm not sure

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crowspeaker
May 8, 2008 6:21 PM

Is that not what you wanted? Go ahead and play around with it.

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a4heo
May 8, 2008 6:32 PM

naw its what i wanted but i'm not sure if it's what others would like.

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crowspeaker
May 8, 2008 7:58 PM

Well, maybe it needs a little tweaking. You squeezed an awful lot into one panel.

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pnmclaug
May 9, 2008 2:25 AM

I'm torn here. I think it's funny that he says it all in one panel, because it makes it sound rushed and nervous, but on the other hand you could pace it and have better comedic timing with multiple panels. I was fond of it though. Make some more.

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Zaster
May 9, 2008 6:20 AM

Anyone unmarried and over 38 is a pedophile? Who knew?

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AngryAmerican
May 9, 2008 1:28 PM

that means i have less than a year to get a wife or start banging kids?

damn. i was hoping to make it to 40....

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a4heo
May 9, 2008 1:33 PM

lol thats just the way i look at it because of tha news

people like that scare me.

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a4heo
May 9, 2008 1:36 PM

here's another one i made

/comics/a4heo/431617/

I like this one better what do you think?

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a4heo
May 9, 2008 4:12 PM

here's another one after that

/comics/a4heo/431686/

i've begun to catch on.

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a4heo
May 10, 2008 12:22 AM

i think i got the whole drug thing down...

/comics/a4heo/431707/

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AngryAmerican
May 10, 2008 1:23 AM

those musta been some fairly mild drugs...

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a4heo
May 10, 2008 10:22 AM

i think they were.

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a4heo
May 10, 2008 6:25 PM

hopefully this is the last time i post.

/comics/a4heo/431751/

thanks for your feedback guys.

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pnmclaug
May 16, 2008 1:51 AM

none of your new comics have any sort of punchline, or joke even. "haha drugs are zany" doesn't count.

 not trying to be mean, just try harder

ps you can't smoke lsd, that's just silly 

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