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Creature_From_Beyond
June 12, 2008 3:47 AM

The Adventures of Pink Pony.  Let me know what you think.

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not_Scyess
June 12, 2008 8:34 AM

I only read 1-5 because I couldn't be arsed to click on the links to view the rest.  But here's my expert analysis:

1, 3, and 5 relied too much on visual gags.  Anyone reading these comics has already seen the characters and backgrounds 400 billion times, so pointing out how "fucked" it is to be at Santa's house with the nail-in-the-head guy isn't going to get any laughs.  It certainly doesn't get any points for originality, because that's what 50% of people here do for their first comic.

2 and 4, on the other hand, were great.  Loved 'em.  Do more of those and you'll be a great stripper.

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faggot
June 12, 2008 11:56 AM

I second that 2 and 4 are funny. I also second that visual gags don't really work with stripcreator. There are a few exceptions, but those are extremely rare. Make some more

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Creature_From_Beyond
October 1, 2008 4:32 AM

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