The Adventures of Pink Pony.  Let me know what you think.

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I only read 1-5 because I couldn't be arsed to click on the links to view the rest.  But here's my expert analysis:

1, 3, and 5 relied too much on visual gags.  Anyone reading these comics has already seen the characters and backgrounds 400 billion times, so pointing out how "fucked" it is to be at Santa's house with the nail-in-the-head guy isn't going to get any laughs.  It certainly doesn't get any points for originality, because that's what 50% of people here do for their first comic.

2 and 4, on the other hand, were great.  Loved 'em.  Do more of those and you'll be a great stripper.

I second that 2 and 4 are funny. I also second that visual gags don't really work with stripcreator. There are a few exceptions, but those are extremely rare. Make some more

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