this is my new comic. do you think its good... what should i improve?

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The last panel doesn't make any sense because the dog was thinking to himself in the first 2 panels, not talking.

 Please make more.

The basic premise of a man and his dog has potential.  I could envision this going in kind of a Garfield direction - only hopefully funnier.  But (like Angry said) you need to pick some ground rules (e.g. the dog can speak English, the man is an alcoholic, or whatever) and stick to them.  So figure it out, and make some more

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bike wrote:
The basic premise of a man and his dog has potential.  I could envision this going in kind of a Garfield direction - only hopefully funnier.  But (like Angry said) you need to pick some ground rules (e.g. the dog can speak English, the man is an alcoholic, or whatever) and stick to them.  So figure it out, and make some more

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