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Vultron
March 2, 2009 1:19 PM

I'm Vultron and I'm new here on stripcreator. Anyway, I want your guys opinion on my comics before I continue.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Vultron/

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crabby
March 2, 2009 9:48 PM

I just want to validate your existence.

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AngryAmerican
March 3, 2009 6:16 PM

I have read your comics. Maybe stripping isn't for you, or maybe you should just try to be funnier.

I hope this wasn't discouraging for you.

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evil_d
March 4, 2009 9:22 AM

There are kernels of humor here, but you bury them under a lot of dialogue that isn't funny or necessary. Try this exercise: next time you write a comic, before you save it, go through and delete as much text as you can without sacrificing the integrity of the joke.

Keep at it, good luck, welcome to Stripcreator. 

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mace4350
March 14, 2009 8:18 AM

Hi, um can you guys look at my comic and see if it is good liek his?

/comics/mace4350/457203/

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crabby
March 14, 2009 9:33 AM

Do you know this person or are you just hijacking their thread? It wouldn't be very nice if someone started posting comics in your Once Upon a time in High School thread and asked for other's opinions on their comics. If you do know him then it's still a dick move and you shouldn't try to steal other people's thunder. The best bet would have been to post this comic with the other 3 you posted in your own thread and wait for responses there.

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LittleRocker
March 14, 2009 9:47 AM

Amen Crabby, Amen.

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mace4350
March 14, 2009 10:56 AM

I'm sorry, gosh, ok I'll leave this forum alone then

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mace4350
March 14, 2009 10:57 AM

but seriously though great comics keep it up

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