What Do You Think Of Once Upon A High schooler?

I just wishthey had some sort of way to have it right there in front of me when I load up this thread. Maybe in the future we'll have the technology.

Well, thanks if you have any opinoins or any input say something

I think if you valued mine or anyone else's opinion then you would have the good nature to read the FAQ and learn to post your comics into the thread for us to read and offer you feedback on your comics. I can't be bothered to make extra clicks to read your comics, come on, buddy! Get your head in the game.

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That 3rd panel in the third comic posted is pretty brutal. You should work on making it so that the first person in the panel doesn't talk before the 2nd person in the panel asks him a question. I'm not sure if the guy is supposed to be some sort of weird alien posing as a high schooler or if he's just an anti social youngster from a broken home. All in all, I think you should continue to hone your craft in the hopes of a better future. Just keep at it and eventually you may or may not come into a rythm and a unique voice all your own.

Well, I love your input crabby, you rock, aslo, no, he isnt posing as a high schooler, the first panel is where mike defeats the monster adn I'm pretty sure the aliens wont return anymore, also here's something to enjoy but for the record I like Blorp-Bleep (skinny bot) so I'll keep

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So the robot turned into Sam?

you know crabby, you know after wat you told me in vultron i realized your right, i shouldnt of done that, i wish people were more like you straight forward and honest, stay crabby!

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wow mace, that was the cheesyest apology i've ever heard.

I'm sorry, again, ok if you wanna post your comics in mine i dont mind, if that is a little rude after what i did then I'm sorry again and if that is also insulting then I'm sorry

and if you dont get that....well you know what I mean sorry ok? please post one of your comics in mine, just so we can be even with teh whole vultron thing ok?

Overall, I like these comics.  The last one was a little iffy, and the robot one sucked.  I would've liked the one where you should've switched the characters if you'd switched the characters.  (Donate and you can edit it!)  But the rest are pretty good.  Keep going.

Haha, i like it how you say donate and you can edit, haha! but seriously... DONATE!!

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LittleRocker wrote:
Haha, i like it how you say donate and you can edit, haha! but seriously... DONATE!!

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Donating is the only way to edit. So he would have to donate to edit.

well I'll do it one day, but not today