A series about Timothy and his Troubles.

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Tell me what you think guys, thanks.

These are getting much better.

I especially liked the ones in the middle.

I think you're on a good path here. There are a good number of good ones in there, and a good number of ones that are aaaalmost there. I like this series though. Keep it up.

thanks, what would be the ones that i have to improve on? and what are the good one? thanks mate.

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This one has a good concept, but the presentation seems a bit off. It'd be better if maybe Timothy was just reading the letter aloud, about the whole AIDS and moving out thing, then just have the last panel read "Love, Mom" Take out the federation of health bit and don't let the reader of the comic know who wrote the letter until the punchline.

As for ones I really liked, I found the "lifting" one, the "hit by a bus" one, and the one where hes in the garbage can to be quite humorous.

thanks for the advice.

i changed it up a bit, is it better?

haha yeah, I like it. I personally would have made it a bit harsher, like with the letter saying "Get out now and never come back. Ever." or whatever, but it's definitely a lot better now.

Thumbs up!

Thanks a lot! Rock On!!!!

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