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Reading these comics are a lot like having sex with Lady Gaga; scary, confusing, and when you're done, you're not quite sure what just happened.

you saying you wouldnt?

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By the way the ppls in the slides are named jack and nathan in these ones NATHAN is guy trying to wake up friend JACK

Just a few tips for ya:

• Stick with the same characters, like with this bunch, they'd be better if you didn't completely confuse the reader with a whole bunch of random characters and a normal plotline
•  Check for mistakes and try and improve your grammar with the "You"'s and stuff, just an opinion, don't get defensive.

Other than that, I think they're fine. I wouldn't want to read them all the time, but they're reasonable and okay to read.

And now for no apparent reason I will post a picture of a llama ;P

Welcome to stripcreator!

Its suppose to be ( suppose to go to fair 1)

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Well this one kinda happened in real life except jack(me)was the one trying to wake up nathan.... who woundn't wake up no matter what!!!, anyway i switched the characters around.

Uhh this was the 1st commic i made so umm it an't tht good its even worse then the others i thought i'd post this one before i got off so can u just like picture this at the top of the list,...thx

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Remember once again picture this at the top!!! thx u

That narrator guy is getting on my nerves.

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this what school is like sometimes for some teenage boys!.

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Suicide is always an option

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my friend made this one it was his first time....

I stopped reading when I saw the word "aribian"

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It's a good idea for a comic, but the fact that you have to narrate the whole thing effectively murders any humor that might've been there.  You have to show the jokes with action -- which in the case of this particular joke might be impossible with this particular comic generator.

Keep trying... just don't try to do what the tool won't let you.  If you can't show the action with the pictures, you just can't do the action.  Narrating it never works.