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HCRoyall
August 29, 2009 5:50 AM

I say this to every newbie, and it should really be part of the FAQ or something, but unless you're posting separate series nobody likes it when you make a new thread every time you post new comics. Some of us try to follow the threads of other newbies that seem promising, and someone making a new thread for every new handful of comics (or in some cases each new comic they make) floods the forum and makes it hard for us to do that.

As for your comics, my statement from the last batch you posted still stands. You show promise, and the first two made me crack a smile if not chuckle to myself, but you seem almost like you're trying too hard.  Also, ease up on the exclamation points.  Sometimes they work in multiples, but very infrequently.  They definitely don't work in the third comic.

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