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this is just one of my many comics plz check out some of my other ones!!!!

You dick. You promised me comics that rock and yet I get this.

 Asshole.

I'd keep dialogue moving from left to right in each panel. That first panel is off putting by having the silence as an answer appear before you question. Simply flipping the characters would have solved this problem. It also wasn't fuinny, so you should work on that as well.

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crabby wrote:
I'd keep dialogue moving from left to right in each panel.

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I think lonewulf did it again in this one, but it worked out:

/comics/lonewulf/464880/

I'm guessing your silence in panel 3 is probably supposed to be another reaction, but it works better as an awkward gap before the girl's question.  Or maybe that was the intent.  At any rate, I haven't watched minute one of that Heroes show, so.. "I got this one".

You lied. that did not rock. at least my comics are decent. that sucked monkey balls and was awful. like waffle without the w. i did get the joke though. just make a more subtle joke and more funny.

i would not throw stones in the glass ballpark you and lonewulf coexist in, josh

I just signed up and made one. But it's kinda hard to reduce your creativity to 3 panels.

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