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Knight23
April 4, 2010 2:57 AM

I don't know how to post comics on the forums so I'll just give you the links.

Frank and Ted 1: /comics/Knight23/491457/

Frank and Ted 2: /comics/Knight23/491458/

Frank and Ted 3: /comics/Knight23/491459/

Frank and Ted 4: /comics/Knight23/491460/

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evil_d
April 4, 2010 1:41 PM

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Knight23 wrote:
I don't know how to post comics on the forums so I'll just give you the links.

Conveniently, that is how to post comics on the forums.

Your comics... they don't make a lot of sense.

Randomness isn't funny by itself.  Try thinking of something funny that you saw or experienced recently.  Then turn it into a comic. 

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Knight23
April 4, 2010 1:56 PM

I'm still new to this so I will get better eventually.

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Knight23
April 4, 2010 2:22 PM

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Knight23
April 4, 2010 10:09 PM

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brycekain
April 4, 2010 11:27 PM

Well the last one I found a bit humorous, but the rest ... I dunnow. Just seems like you're making comics just to make them. There's very few punchlines, not much that's relatable, and it doesn't seem like you're writing about stuff that happens in your daily life (or things you generally find humorous or annoying.) So it comes off as superficial. To me anyway.

Write what you know, man. That's what helped ME get my whole two lovely stars :)

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Knight23
April 5, 2010 12:21 AM

Hopefully these should solve a problem or 2

/comics/Knight23/491538/

/comics/Knight23/491540/

 

I would explain myself but i'll let the robots talk for now

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Knight23
April 8, 2010 2:30 PM

/comics/Knight23/491979/

hopefully i will be able to make these more entertaining

still they are pretty fun to make

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Knight23
April 13, 2010 11:50 PM

Gamers may know what I'm talking about in the next one

/comics/Knight23/492340/

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brycekain
April 14, 2010 6:31 AM

What I've found to help, when doing a niche comic (or obscure comic reference) is to find a way to subtly explain the back story of the niche or reference without taking too long. Not an easy task. Serial comics work well for this, but again, if the reader isn't familiar with the material, then they may not find it funny.

Usually my obscure comics involve fight club or tv bits that I've watched. When I do these I try to explain through humor (or character dialog) what the back story is. If I can't do this easily, I will at the very least try to broaden the comedy/punchline to something most people can relate to.

So to make a long story short (too late) it's not easy, but it's doable. Keep tryin', man.

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