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LittleRocker
February 9, 2011 5:58 AM

After looking through my comics I found some horid ones, and some damn right ugly ones, but I also found some that I feel deserve a second chance, tell me what you think

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HCRoyall
February 9, 2011 1:57 PM

They're not bad.  They're amusing, but they're lacking that certain something that makes me laugh.  I can't really say what's wrong with them; it just feels like something could have been done differently about the punchlines or the delivery or something like that.  Sorry I can't be more specific.

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sjwieczorkow
March 17, 2011 5:38 AM

Indeed they are pretty good! However, I agree with the above. They are like 99% of how mine are turning out to be. Understandable, clever, but not Earth Shattering. Shatter the EARTH!

 

Good you didn't throw them away. I liked 'em.

 

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