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Spaceclutch
April 9, 2011 9:17 AM

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Spaceclutch

 

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Spaceclutch
April 9, 2011 9:20 AM

#$@. I hate being a newbie. I don't think I put the link in properly for the comic to show up. Also, you'll probably notice a few typos in the strip here and there. I made a donation so I could edit them, but it hasn't processed yet. Hope you like them anyway!

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biped
April 9, 2011 10:16 AM

Everybody's a newbie once.  Just paste the comic's URL into the reply box like this:

/comics/Spaceclutch/519511/

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Spaceclutch
April 9, 2011 10:33 AM

Awesome. Thanks! Here's my latest addition:

 

/comics/Spaceclutch/519513/

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smamurai
April 9, 2011 11:24 AM

I really like the premise of two guys working in a crumbling business, having to scrabble for food and darkly regressing into pathetic primitive animals without morals.

I think the chars should swap position in the Easter bunny strip. Maybe cut some lines and words in strips. Don't over-explain things. My first comics are too wordy with me trying to be a scriptwriter in 3 panels and it's hard work for the reader.

This was the advice I was given when I first started whoring myself.

The guy asking to borrow a newspaper was brilliant.

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Spaceclutch
April 9, 2011 2:27 PM

Good advice. Thanks!

I see what you mean about swapping chars around.

Thanks for the comments. :) The next one should be better and have less typos hopefully. I do some of these on my iPhone, so it's easy to screw them up.

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biped
April 9, 2011 8:42 PM

I know it was a mistype, but I like "Tooty" as a name for that character.

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