So I'm trying out writing some comics. I read alot when I was pretending to read the paper and now I want to make them the way I wish they always were, a little violent and possibly thought provoking. Even if the thought isn't the cleanest one. I hope you like em, if you don't then get bent. I've seen some pretty funny ones on here. Ramble Ramble Ramble, now you hate me...

Nice start.  I've seen much, much worse stuff.  At least your effort makes sense.  You wouldn't believe how many don't.  Just remember....comics don't always have to be funny but they DO have to provoke thought.

Yeah, this is decent work, keep at it.