So I would like some feedback on my first comic strip. No need to go on and on about my genius a few tomes will do.

I saw the strip but missed the comic!

/comics/whateversclever/579942/

I suspect that I would find this to be biting social commentary, if I could understand it.  But I can't.  It kind of reads like a word-association exercise.  Do a little more connecting the dots for us next time.

Also, you misspelled "privilege".

Welcome to Stripcreator!

Thanks for the comments! Will take into account next time. Good catch on the spelling mistake. My bad.