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anonymous
February 7, 2001 10:25 AM

Hi I'm new here and was wondering what you all thought of my stuff. The one with teh devil has a typeo I missed, is there any way to edit comics?

http://www.lowpass.net/stripcreator/comiclist.php?author=Fracture

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BigEvilDan
February 7, 2001 12:19 PM

Subject: Re: Is my stuff even funny?

There is no way at the moment to edit comics. However, I find the title "To err id hueman" funny in an ironic sort of way. Leave it the way it is. ;)

Since I have important work I'm busy putting off, here's my comments on your strips:

"This is how..." - I liked this one. It gets bonus points for having social commentary as well as including Martha Stewart in a list of evils.

"To err id hueman" - Made me smile a bit.

"Outing the family" - Funny,and a creative use of backgrounds.

"Fun with Regis" - Regis + physical abuse = funny

"We only hurt the ones we love" - Don't really get it.

"Don't try this at home" - I'm not a fan of LSD strips.

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anonymous
February 7, 2001 12:38 PM

Subject: Re: Is my stuff even funny?

Yeah I spelt the title wrong on purpose for "To err id hueman"

"We only hurt the ones we love" Yeah that was a bit weak.

I hope at some point they get the Read Meat guys on here at some point.

I should probably get myself an account here.

I made a new one but not sure if it's good. I need to dig out some old strips I did.

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evil_d
February 7, 2001 2:29 PM

Subject: Re: Is my stuff even funny?

Ah, the eternal question.

I think "Outing the Family" is the best. Like Dan said, bonus points for the creative use of backgrounds. Very clever.

I also don't like drug strips, because they're way too easy and overdone. Swirly blue background + randomness = barrel full of dead fish, but not humorous. However, I think the line "I can taste what you're thinking" is pretty damn funny, making "Don't try this at home" one of the best drug strips I've yet seen.

"Consecutive Run on Life Sentences" is a great title.

I always love some good Microsoft-bashing. "You have the right..." has a funny premise, but I feel like it could be delivered better. MS' attitude/reaction could have been more severe/immediate/absurd. I might have done the third panel something like this:

Letter-reading guy thinks: Not owning a computer is not an excuse. An axe-wielding maniac will be coming door-to-door to sell you one.
Invisible right character: Knock, knock.

or this:

Letter-reading guy thinks: Not owning a computer is irrelevant, as it does not preclude you from owning a copy of any computer software.

Of course, you should ignore my advice or opinions if you don't like the sort of strips I write. My sense of humor is frequently not in sync with that of the general population of this site.

If your strips came up for me to vote on, I'd probably give most of them about a 5, which is my standard score. So, you're doing OK.

Think about participating in the contest that Gabe is organizing (see the "Comic Contest?" thread). It might be good practice.

And welcome aboard.

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Fracture
February 7, 2001 4:01 PM

Subject: Re: Is my stuff even funny?

Actually your right some form of those last two would work better.

Thanks again. I'm trying to find my old Red Meat strips I did I want to modify them for here as I never did get a chance to post them anyplace thanks to The RMCS not allowing new people in and all.

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