50717

I thought it was ok, simple yet effective...

I see nuggets of funny here and there in some of your other strips, but not this one.

I noticed that in your most recent one, you didn't use narrations in every panel... THANK YOU. Just because the box is there doesn't mean you have to use it for anything.

50741
I see your point about the narrative boxes, but i cant help it, there just soooooo inviting....

And just to finish off this short and totally worthwhile series...
50742
Damn those narrative boxes... damn them all to hell!!!

John Carradine in Red Zone Cuba: "They ran all the way to hell".

Look, your fancy quotes wont wash with me matey....
Despite the fact i have no idea what you meant by it, so there!!!

The inspiration, it burns!
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50748

Hehe, I only used the narration boxes in 2 of my 7 comics, my 2 "RPG battle" episodes ...

Way too much inanity and focus on narration boxes. All the narration makes baby Jebus cry.