The crappy start of somthing soon to be crappier

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fokker2 March 9, 2002 4:24 PM	CLICKIE
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dcomposed March 9, 2002 5:24 PM	why would anybody clickie if we alredy know its crappy?
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Drexle March 9, 2002 11:20 PM	quote: why would anybody clickie if we alredy know its crappy? Ask crabby.
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dcomposed March 9, 2002 11:28 PM	I did clickie and that wasn't crappy.
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DexX March 10, 2002 2:25 AM	Not bad, but please kill the narrative boxes.
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fokker2
March 10, 2002 9:47 AM

You dont like the narration? Why not?,
Well the narration was just an experiment anyway. It is my first attempt at making toons using strip creator.
(not really very fond of the "three panel format"
But I think I can get used to it)

Never heard of strip creator at all actualy, until yesterday afternoon.

But anyway, I got a few of my friends to look at "Anal Aliens" this morning, and they all seem to agree the narration sucks. so I shall kill the narration.

Another idea, was to maybe shorten the name to "AA" (THAT works on SO many levels)

-->insert evil laugh of your choice here<--

I am going be staying with "Anal Aliens" for awhile, becouse I have a Fruck of lot of ideas for it.

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kramer_vs_kramer March 10, 2002 11:48 AM	On the plus side, we can't sue you under the trade descriptions act.
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Drexle March 10, 2002 12:24 PM	We don't generally like narrations because of two things... 1) They can be kind of redundant when all they're doing is stating the obvious. 2) Narrations that state the obvious feel like the author isn't giving us enough credit to figure out what is going on by context alone. Here, I'll show you... 40958
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kramer_vs_kramer March 10, 2002 12:38 PM	To be fair to this guy, he could remove all the narrations and his strips would still be crap.
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fokker2 March 17, 2002 7:00 PM	quote: We don't generally like narrations because of two things... 1) They can be kind of redundant when all they're doing is stating the obvious. 2) Narrations that state the obvious feel like the author isn't giving us enough credit to figure out what is going on by context alone. Here, I'll show you... 40958 Hehehehe. Good one. that was frickin funny.
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fokker2 March 22, 2002 4:29 PM	I Have noticed a few toons with more than three panels Used in the toon. My Stupid question of the day? How is that done? (I know, the answer is staring me in the face, and I am Just not seeing it.) Thanks.
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BigEvilDan March 22, 2002 5:27 PM	quote: I Have noticed a few toons with more than three panels Used in the toon. My Stupid question of the day? How is that done? (I know, the answer is staring me in the face, and I am Just not seeing it.) Thanks. Do you mean like this? 28209 Use the splitter background. It's a black line in the middle of the background, which makes one panel look like two.
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FlarioKun March 22, 2002 9:17 PM	Lot's of anal sex jokes going on, you like mallrats?
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wirthling March 23, 2002 10:27 PM	quote: Lot's of anal sex jokes going on, you like mallrats? Maybe he likes anal sex.
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