i disagree with boinky. go figure.
mr. sylvania, your comics suffer from the all-over-the-damned-place freedom-drunkenness that most of us experience our first times on stripcreator, but there's some decided cleverness at work here too. try out the comics contest--i think that when your creativity is reined in a bit you'll make a good impression.
in fact, my only other suggestion is that you try not to annoy people by being brazen in your posts--e.g. titling this thread "what's a cunt gotta do..." attempts to draw attention to oneself usually end in the regulars hating you. a lot.