My first attempt at a comic what does anyone think?.

Hmmm.

Well, as an honest critique... I think you use the narration a bit too much. I'm also seems like I need to know your friends to understand these jokes. Since I don't know them, I don't really get it.

But keep trying!

Thanks for ur input I will work on that for next time

i think u should patent the combustable bunny dildo before someone else does... unless its already been patented.