Hi! I'm new here. I've started a comic to win the internal competition of the online game "Merchant Empires". It had 5 strips and I won. After that, I tried to kill off the character, but he wouldn't let me. That's how the thread "Alive" came to be:

Please tell me if it's good enough to be continued.

BTW, read all 6 "Alive" strips, and then judge, please.

I'm refreshing this for somebody to finally notice my comic. (Please! It's not half bad!)

well, i've noticed it. and it's not half bad. it's about two-thirds bad. the other third, however, shows promise. keep at it, and post again when you're ready to write about something other than that meta-comical, tongue-in-cheek third-person-omniscient smarmy stuff. i hate having to hyphenate this much.

"Alive" was the weak series, actually. Your other strips were better on the whole.