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paleSeptember 16, 2002 7:56 PM
Feedback much appreciated. 288678 388693 4!88695 And a special one: 88479
dcomposedSeptember 16, 2002 8:07 PM
the last one is pretty good. the others are good too, but the lastone is best.
paleSeptember 16, 2002 8:11 PM
why thank you.
kramer_vs_kramerSeptember 17, 2002 1:37 AM
Quite good, but I'd give the narration a bit of a rest. And it's Richard D James.
paleSeptember 17, 2002 3:59 PM
I know it's Richard D James :-P Just left out the initial needlessly I suppose. Im just glad people know who he is!