Hope that drew some attention... sheesh.
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Bash it as you see fit.

I enjoyed it.

Good.

Even better without the narration boxes.

Narration boxes may be little, yellow, and different, but they're not necessarily better. Lose 'em.

Thanks for the advice. The last one would have worked without them.