Only posted two comics so far as this is my first real attempt at this stripcreator gubbins.

Ah well...

Feel free to offer feedback/opinions.

Not bad, although you might want to have the characters saying a little less in each balloon, so that it doesn't look like they're standing in four feet of water (unless given the subject matter, you wanted that effect).

Not bad.

I'm usualy too lazy to read that much text in one comic. I read these and they were pretty good.