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RedCheesyPoof
January 14, 2003 9:10 AM

Well here are first six attempts at humor, enjoy:
My Collection o' Comic Strips

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not_Scyess
January 14, 2003 9:15 AM

I like your running theme, but the comics are hit-and-miss. There are a few good ones in there, though.

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Subspace
January 14, 2003 9:23 AM

I concur with not_Scyess. The ones I enjoyed:

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=RedCheesyPoof&ID=115360

Would've been better if you had the first frame completely black, the second line with the text, and the third frame containing the punch line, OR; a conversation going with himself in both of the black frames. Empty frames after what's supposed to be the "punch line" doesn't do it for me. :P

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=RedCheesyPoof&ID=115738

*Laughs* Good one.

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RedCheesyPoof
January 14, 2003 11:40 AM

I agree about the "Live Action Roleplaying" strip. I was debating on whether to leave it at two panels or use all three. I see now I should have gone with three. The hit-and-miss thing is probably true as well. Perhaps I should take the George Costanza approach and do one joke a day, then leave on a high note :).

Many thanks for the constructive criticism, I'll try and get some better stuff up.

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punkrockskaboy
January 14, 2003 2:35 PM

werd on the hit or miss.

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jes_lawson
January 14, 2003 2:40 PM

Potential noted, Blind Dates one was funny.

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Buffylavalamp
January 14, 2003 4:37 PM

quote:
I concur with not_Scyess. The ones I enjoyed:

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=RedCheesyPoof&ID=115360

Would've been better if you had the first frame completely black, the second line with the text, and the third frame containing the punch line, OR; a conversation going with himself in both of the black frames. Empty frames after what's supposed to be the "punch line" doesn't do it for me. :P


Or maybe have the last frame black again, as if he turned the light back off so as not to see the horror anymore.

Anyway, this is S***pcr**tor. You don't have to censor the fucking swear words. :) I firmly believe profanity used properly can be funny, but censoring it like that just distracts me and detracts from any humour value.

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