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jackcJanuary 15, 2003 6:21 AM
http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=jackc&ID=115679
kramer_vs_kramerJanuary 15, 2003 6:32 AM
I think you may be overdoing the narration a tad.
But apart from that they're not too bad.
jackcJanuary 15, 2003 7:49 AM
Trying to make sense of these weird, confusing times!
theniwrenatorJanuary 15, 2003 7:49 AM
i like them...a lot. haha, polo shirt...
jackcJanuary 15, 2003 8:03 AM
Thanks for feedback. Narration is a minefield (just ask James Joyce). Apologies for my second post (was trying to figure out what "quote" meant/did. How does one "uninvisibalize"?
theniwrenatorJanuary 15, 2003 8:23 AM
quote:Apologies for my second post (was trying to figure out what "quote" meant/did. open parenthesis --->( close parenthesis----> ) :) yeah, i know, who cares? sorry.
quote:Apologies for my second post (was trying to figure out what "quote" meant/did.
not_ScyessJanuary 15, 2003 10:11 AM
I really liked them, especially the first 6 or 7. For once, I don't think the narration boxes took away much at all. I loved this one:
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"Old toothbrush!" Classic!
More!
supertrace72January 15, 2003 1:11 PM
I thought they were great!