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bongman January 17, 2003 9:51 AM	Check my stuff out. Tell me what u all think. I'm looking for constructive criticism here, not some 12 year old saying "j00 suck daddy-0!". So tell me what works, what doesn't, and please, remember the suffocating part ;) you don't need a link but I'll throw one if for those of you who I suffocated for too long. http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=bongman&ID=117161
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not_Scyess January 17, 2003 9:58 AM	Sorry I dont' have too much constructive to add -- your first comic was just awful and your next two were good but a bit off in the timing, if "timing" makes any sense in a comic strip. Sorry I can't be more specific. I'd suggest you read some good comics (on sc.com and off) and notice what gives a joke oomph, then try to use that knowledge for good rather than for evil.
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evil_d
January 17, 2003 10:03 AM

Just to be contrary... I think the first one's alright, but the other two don't do much for me. The background-changing thing and talking about doing too much drugs are overused and, IMO, weren't very funny to begin with. The third is a little bit confusing and I don't get what the fight has to do with anything. If one of the asian girls had just been standing there and then the cop came along and said "I have to pick you up, etc.", it would have worked better for me.

Welcome to StripCreator.

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bongman January 17, 2003 10:19 AM	Thanks for the comments, I will take timing under concideration. Just fyi, the latest comic means nothing, that was my mistake.
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Xena January 17, 2003 10:23 AM	It's a nice start. You are on your way. Keep up the good work, and remember: The Funniest Comic is the one that hasn't been drawn yet.
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bongman January 17, 2003 11:23 AM	words of wisdom
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bongman January 17, 2003 11:03 PM	Check the new one out, I think you guyz will like it. http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=Bongman&ID=117577
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not_Scyess January 18, 2003 12:12 AM	Hm... you thought wrong.
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bongman January 18, 2003 12:48 AM	dont be a dick or anything
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Xena January 18, 2003 7:16 AM	Keep it up. You have the standard 3-panel punch-line timing down well enough. But 'rape' is one thing I find too strong a word to use at the end. X-Boxes aren't built for that type of punishment.
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supertrace72 January 18, 2003 9:33 AM	i thought it was fine. . .hey i am new here too. . .my strips either make no sense because they were written to fuck with one specific person's head, or are bubblegummy. . .or they are stupid but totally crack ME up. . .i think it takes lots of time and practice. . .and the ability to delete the ones that suck, so others wont read them. . .keep going. . .
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punkrockskaboy January 18, 2003 10:42 AM	quote: dont be a dick or anything Scyess...NOT be a dick? Haha, that is the funniest thing you have put on this site yet!
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supertrace72 January 18, 2003 12:01 PM	scyess was mr sweetie-pie to me! heh heh heh! same goes for mr. file13-i-poo. See? be sweet and theyre sweet. im not scared! LOL!
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bongman January 28, 2003 2:15 AM	Try this for flavor. http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=Bongman&ID=120682
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punkrockskaboy January 28, 2003 2:07 PM	for flavor? It was a little bland...
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not_Scyess January 28, 2003 2:42 PM	That one was executed well, but the joke was just not funny. I think it must be one of those "funny in your head but not in practice" comics. Unless it wasn't funny in your head, either. You can post comics by finding the comic number (in the URL above the comic) and placing it between comic UBB tags, like this: 120682
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punkrockskaboy January 28, 2003 6:46 PM	Yeah, posting that way saves us some effort.
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Devin
January 28, 2003 11:33 PM

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You can post comics by finding the comic number (in the URL above the comic) and placing it between comic UBB tags, like this:

120682

I've always wondered... why is it that people see us posting comics this way but don't EVER seem to think, "hmm, they couldn't ALL be so diligent as to use all the UBB necessary to make the link look like that, there must be a trick to it... oh, the FAQ will tell me!"

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ArtemisStrong January 28, 2003 11:34 PM	quote: Yeah, posting that way saves us some effort. Of wasting a bunch of time to look at crap... werd.
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bongman January 29, 2003 3:14 AM	There, now thats flavor. 121124
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not_Scyess January 29, 2003 9:55 AM	quote: Check my stuff out. Tell me what u all think. I'm looking for constructive criticism here, not some 12 year old saying "j00 suck daddy-0!". So tell me what works, what doesn't... Hm... I seem to remember this being the topic of this thread, or somethin'...
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bongman January 29, 2003 10:35 AM	Just taking your advice to heart, nothing personal, just trying to be funny.
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punkrockskaboy January 29, 2003 6:58 PM	quote: Of wasting a bunch of time to look at crap... werd. Haha.
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bongman April 20, 2003 1:53 AM	check it I know, its been done. 138564
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carthanite April 20, 2003 2:09 AM	117274 hilarious! your other's just don't do it for me though.
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bongman April 20, 2003 8:25 PM	Thats um.... modern art... yeah... ;) says something about the injustices in.... guatemala.. yeah....
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