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I thought they were funny in a straight forward type way.
BEATNIKS = COMEDY!
Except you killed him which I'm kind of against. Couldn't you have just offered him a glass of water?

I laughed keep up the good work.
I've seen alot worse.

I've seen worse, too. Maybe not a lot worse, but worse. Here's what I say:

• Ease up on the caps lock
  
• Lose the emoticons and Internet speak in dialog (and in narration boxes)
  
• Make more comics; practice makes per-, er, not so crappy.
  

Enjoy.

WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? LOL :)

I'm talking about the degradation of the moral fabric of society due to moths named drugs, money, and hatred.

Care to discuss?

I'm not afraid of moths, I'm more afraid of Michael Jackson. His Nose. Gah!

Seriously , all are OK in moderation, except the hate thing... I was going to write hatered here but I'm fecked if I know if I am spelling it correctly...

Hatred?
Hatered?

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Make more comics; practice makes per-, er, not so crappy.

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Don't you mean, "no one should make comics that are so crabby-- er, I mean, crappy?"

Michael Jackson molests children.

THEY NEVER PROVED THAT!

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I AM GONNA HAVE TO TAKE YOU IN ON THIS ONE J/K LOLOLOLOL

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Haha! Funny! colon close-parenthesis!

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Michael Jackson molests children.

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Michael Jackson molests boinky33.

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Thank you!

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