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hobbitlove
March 21, 2003 10:56 AM

read my damn comics....
read my damn comics....
read my damn comics....
read my damn comics....
read my damn comics....

*guy walks in*
damn it who broke hobbitlove again, i'll get my hammer.

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TheGovernor
March 21, 2003 11:12 AM

keep trying, I sort of liked the death missing the simpsons one but the rest sadly did not float my boat.

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naz_ghul
March 21, 2003 11:21 AM

I'm going to agree with thegovernor here. I can see where you're going with some of them, I just think some of the executions are a bit akward. Try reading the strips of some of the regulars; they'll show you how to polish your punchlines. (Ick, that sounded foul)

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evil_d
March 21, 2003 11:23 AM

Not a bad start. I like the Death series. The Jesus one has been done many times before, but this isn't a particularly bad version of it. I think death finally gets some rest is my favorite. The next three are pretty good too. The idea of France changing its name to "Freedom" is a pretty funny one. On the whole, I think your ideas are good, you have a good sense of what makes things funny, but your inattention to grammar/spelling/punctuation/capitalization/etc. often detracts from an otherwise good strip. Keep at it, and welcome to Stripcreator.

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hobbitlove
March 21, 2003 3:40 PM

thanks all. and yah evil d. i usually just type and post, so my spelling and whatnot seem off.

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