Forum archives » Read My Damn Comics » Working within a frame: On the 'fourth wall'.

Eradream
April 9, 2003 3:26 PM

Stripcreator, while limiting, offers hilarity and excellent comics because of this.
On a non-related topic, here are some other ones.

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- Era

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not_Scyess
April 9, 2003 11:23 PM

The whole "in-comic references to being on Stripcreator" theme is a bit old, but if you can ignore that the comics were quite funny. I approve. Mostly.

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microfetus
April 9, 2003 11:39 PM

I liked the first two but then it just kind of went downhill and dressed up in women's clothing from there. Too many comics in a row focusing on the same joke are bad for business. Just look at 8-Bit Theater. (although in your case "too many" is referring to only three)

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not_Scyess
April 10, 2003 12:37 AM

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I liked the first two but then it just kind of went downhill and dressed up in women's clothing from there.
Now there's a mixed metaphor I can get behind and support all the way to the ballot box, and then eat with a spoon!

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PhreakyChinchilla
April 10, 2003 6:25 AM

I didn't find the girl turning into Wirthling everytime she looked at the reader very funny. I think your delivery is pretty good and you aren't over narrating, both positive signs.

Now just work on the 'funny' part.

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evil_d
April 10, 2003 10:05 AM

Some of these jokes have been done before, but I think this was a decent rendition of them. I thought the girl turning into Wirthling's head was pretty funny. I have to admit I don't get part 4.

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Choobychooby
April 10, 2003 12:15 PM

I don't know if I get any of them.

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Eradream
April 10, 2003 12:50 PM

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Thanks for the input. Aye, they've probably inevitably been done before, but I wanted to do my own version of them. I'm not too fond of letting characters break the fourth wall, but I wanted to make those partly BECAUSE of that.

And I'll take the fact that boinky hasn't added his "meh" yet as a compliment.

Keep up the good work, guys.

- Era

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Devin
April 10, 2003 1:20 PM

No, YOU keep up the good work, punk!

Oh wait, that wasn't an insult. Sorry, I haven't taken my ritalin today.

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Eradream
April 10, 2003 1:24 PM

More like a reflex, I'll wager.

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jes_lawson
April 10, 2003 1:47 PM

That last one was good, I liked that one. The comics I mean.

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